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Murda sharir review

Post by AMAN KUMAR on Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:28 am

Yha aap 'murda sharir' story par review de sakte hai.
Story link
http://icufc.forumotions.in/t39-murda-sharir

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Re: Murda sharir review

Post by Shubham Kulshreshtha on Mon Jun 11, 2012 2:45 pm

aapne bahut hee achhi kahani likhi hai aman bha khas tour se aapka idea bahut achha hai.

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Re: Murda sharir review

Post by AMAN KUMAR on Mon Jun 11, 2012 6:29 pm

Shubham Kulshreshtha wrote:aapne bahut hee achhi kahani likhi hai aman bha khas tour se aapka idea bahut achha hai.
maine story complete kar di hai. Smile

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Re: Murda sharir review

Post by Shubham Kulshreshtha on Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:41 pm

Maine aapki poori story parh li aman bhai Smile
Aur kafi achhi story likhi hai aapne lekin bura mat maaniyega aisa lag rha hai jaise aapne ending me thodi jaldbaazi kar di..

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Re: Murda sharir review

Post by AMAN KUMAR on Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:45 pm

Ha aisa aap kah sakte hai 3 part k hisab se par maine ise purani general story k hisab se bnaya hai

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Re: Murda sharir review

Post by Shubham Kulshreshtha on Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:49 pm

chaliye koi baat nhi Smile

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